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Looking in the Window: Lost and Found at Christmas, a Barely Above Water Short Story



A peek into Christmas in the lives of Matt and Suzie from Barely Above Water. Originally published in the December issue of  Good Stuff from Gailā€™s Book Nook. See sidebar to sign up for future copies.



Earlier at the shower

Suzie hadnā€™t seen Aunt Frieda since Matt and Suzieā€™s wedding, but Suzie intended to become part of Mattā€™s remaining family, and she wanted Aunt Frieda to know that. She couldnā€™t believe sheā€™d forgotten the one thing Aunt Frieda asked Matt and her to bring. But she had it now from the local grocery in Hartā€™s Mountain, North Carolina, and she was headed back to Aunt Friedaā€™s house. Her mouth gaped in awe at the landscape.

Icicles hung like crystal tendrils on the barren trees on a precipice to her left. The sun glinted off of them in silver tones. An ice sculpture of cascading water that had frozen in its tracks sparkled on a rock embankment on her right. She couldnā€™t let this magical wonderland distract her for long, but sheā€™d never seen anything like it.

She leaned her head forward as she crept at a snailā€™s pace on the slippery road. The car inched over the center line, and she rotated the wheel. The vehicle slid then sped downhill toward the cliff. Suzieā€™s heart pounded in her chest. She screamed, but there was no one to hear.

***

Matt checked his watch. Suzie had left an hour ago to run a twenty-minute errand. She was so sensitive. Of course, sheā€™d sensed how he yearned to stay close to those he loved, especially at Christmas. Tradition mattered, but now he wished heā€™d never said heā€™d brought fruitcake to Aunt Friedaā€™s ever since Mom died. Suzie had insisted sheā€™d pick it up. Then she got busy throwing the party for the kids he coached in football and writing extra articles for The Sun Dial, the newspaper where she worked in Destin. No wonder she forgot. He wrung his large hands as he paced back and forth in front of Aunt Friedaā€™s picture window overlooking the snow-covered mountains in the distance. ā€œWhat was I thinking letting her go out alone?ā€

Aunt Frieda ran her hands through her dark hair. She looked so much like Mom. The emptiness left in his soul when Mom died seemed worse every Christmas, but right now, he just wanted Suzie back safe and sound.

ā€œSuzie insisted she wanted to take care of it.ā€ Wrinkles creased Aunt Friedaā€™s brow. ā€œShe has her cell phone, doesnā€™t she?ā€

ā€œYes,ā€ Matt called Suzie and got no answer.

ā€œYouā€™re as white as the snow.ā€

Tears pooled in Mattā€™s eyes and blurred the ornaments on the Christmas tree. ā€œI lost her once when we were dating because after Mom died...ā€ The words nearly choked him...ā€œI couldnā€™t deal with illness, and Suzie has Lyme disease.ā€ He wiped his brow. ā€œSheā€™s been so strong and fought so hard to be all right.ā€

ā€œIā€™m sure sheā€™s fine. Sheā€™ll walk in here any minute. In this weather it could take an extra forty-five minutes to drive to town and back, and she hasnā€™t been gone that long.ā€

Aunt Frieda motioned for Matt to sit in the Navy easy chair. He obliged, and she plopped down on the matching sofa.

***

Suzie raised her head off the steering wheel and rubbed it. ā€œOuch.ā€ Where was she? Why was everything white? Where was her Mom? Oh, Mom died. Suzie sobbed. She missed Mom so much. Ralph, the only Dad sheā€™d ever known, died too. She had no one until she met Matt. Where was he? Her body heaved with more crying.

***

Matt tapped his foot on the hardwood floor. ā€œI canā€™t wait any longer. Iā€™m going to look for her.ā€

Aunt Frieda scooted to the edge of the couch. ā€œIt wonā€™t hurt to search on your own, but if she isnā€™t on the main road, youā€™ll need a four wheel drive to navigate the scenic route.ā€

Matt slapped his forehead. ā€œShe took the drive with a view. I just know it. Thatā€™s so like her.ā€

The color drained from Aunt Friedaā€™s face. ā€œLetā€™s go. Fredā€™s old jeepā€™s in the garage.ā€

The two of them jumped up, put on heavy outdoor clothing and left. Frozen snow crunched underneath their boots as they stepped to the garage. Aunt Frieda handed Matt the keys and slipped into the passengerā€™s seat. He backed out and ice cracked as the wheels rolled across the driveway.

ā€œYou look just like your mom driving the car, the way you held your mouth when you turned the key, and with your dark hair and eyes.ā€ Aunt Frieda shook her head. ā€œThis time last year Fred was shoveling snow in the driveway. We have too many holes in our hearts to be so young.ā€ Aunt Frieda gave Matt a friendly jab on the arm. ā€œWell, at least you and Suzie are young.ā€

ā€œFifty-two is hardly old.ā€

Aunt Frieda chuckled and lightened the mood ā€œWeā€™ll always have our memories, but letā€™s not forget our blessings. Donā€™t worry. Suzieā€™s fine. Iā€™m so glad we have her.ā€

ā€œMe too, weā€™ll all stay in touch after Christmas. Itā€™s important for us to be here for each other.ā€

ā€œThereā€™s the base of the road.ā€ Aunt Frieda pointed, and Matt turned onto a steep parkway covered in frozen snow. The jeep slid toward a rock wall on the left, but Matt straightened the car. His heart pounded in his chest, not only at the near miss, but at the thought of Suzie cold and frightened on this treacherous stretch. If only he could floorboard the pedal and zip to her.

The tires spun. Determination filled every fiber of Mattā€™s being, and he accelerated to pull the vehicle forward. The car slipped toward the guardrail on the right. Sweat popped out on Mattā€™s brow as he righted the vehicle. He breathed deep trying to relax. ā€œThereā€™s no one else out here, and I can see why.ā€

ā€œEveryone who lives in these hills knows better. The surface freezes at one end of the road before the snowplows make it to the other. Theyā€™ll close it. This storm came up so fast they just havenā€™t done it yet.ā€

Large snowflakes pelted the windshield. Matt leaned forward. ā€œNow, I canā€™t see.ā€

ā€œStop! Thatā€™s your car!ā€

A twinge of hope coursed through Matt as he drove to the wreck. ā€œShe crashed into the tree growing up from the cliff. That kept her from tumbling over it.ā€ Matt trembled. Tears rushed to his eyes as he cut the engine.

ā€œWe know who stopped that car.ā€ Aunt Frieda touched Mattā€™s arm.

ā€œOh yes, thank God!ā€ Matt hopped out and charged toward Suzie, slipping, sliding, and waving his arms to keep his balance.

He opened the door, and Suzie grabbed him around the neck so tightly he hardly could breathe. She shivered in his arms. ā€œHow long have you been here?ā€

ā€œIā€™m not sure. At first I was thinking about Mom and Ralph, and I couldnā€™t remember where I was.ā€ She turned and picked up a grocery bag from the passengerā€™s seat. ā€œHereā€™s the fruitcake.ā€

Aunt Frieda took tentative steps to them. Suzie slid out of the car and hugged her, and Matt threw his arms around both of them.

Aunt Frieda wiped tears from her cheeks. ā€œLetā€™s go home and celebrate Christmas!ā€

The End

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